[Attempts at being witty aside, at least remember that a sentence is not a sentence if it does not contain either a (S)ubject, an (O)bject or a (V)erb.]
["i hate old gossip, but for fresh ones to come out, old ones have to be introduced"
i could write a whole thesis on the incoherence present in this short, but run-on sentence.]
[p.s. I'm not sure if you're deleting this blog. But if you aren't, please stop calling us Film & Media studiers.
p.p.s. It's "Film & Media Studies". Note the capitalisation and ampersand. Google "ampersand" if you need to.]
["Film & Media studiers"
the unnecessary comma in "born, again"
inconsistencies in capitalization of "Gossip Girl"
the lack of a subject in "teaches everyone a little lesson" (who/what taught everyone a lesson?)]
the unnecessary comma in "born, again"
inconsistencies in capitalization of "Gossip Girl"
the lack of a subject in "teaches everyone a little lesson" (who/what taught everyone a lesson?)]
kudos to Jarrel, Emmei, and Joanie.
P.s. GG - please update more kay.
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